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Today you came in and were instantly confused. Why were the desks all lined up facing each other? It was almost as if someone had plotted a way to pit you against each other in some sort of competition. Almost … and was.

We played Jeopardy. Questions about who said what, what the story was, and then dig, dig, digging to find every nuance of meaning in the story. Look below and find the quotes. If you want to see if you’re on the right track, pick a quote, find every tiny little morsel of meaning in it (point form), and then come in tomorrow and show me what you found. I’ll tell you what mark you’d get when I mark the Real Test. I cannot stress this enough:

THE TEST IS NIT-PICKY AND HARD.

YOU MUST STUDY !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Study These

DownloadedFile-1Here are three quotes from each short story; I will choose two quotes out of the three. You are to answer in point form, giving as many facts and reference points as possible. What does the quote show about the speaker or the person spoken about? Does it reference the theme or another quote from the story? Does it show the relationship between two characters? The nature/attitude/behaviour/motivation of a character? Is there a literary term present in the quote? Irony? Symbolism? Give as much information as possible. You should create a study sheet for each of these quotes. Do exactly what we did in class with the examples I gave you. This section of the test is worth 50 marks!!

” No, no,” he said.”You spank me every time I do that, won’t you Dad? … spank me, Dad. “

I thought of him playing ball with the other children. At first they’d go along with the outlandish variations he’d introduce into the game, because it was his equipment, then, somehow, they’d be playing with the bat and glove and he’d be out of it, watching.

I’d get the awful feeling then that we were both lost. That whatever I’d done wrong had not only failed, but that he’d never know I’d been trying to do it right for him. Worse still, that his mind was rocked by some blind contradiction he’d never understand himself.

” Those letters! If they were alive, I would kill them one by one.They were shameful to read– almost like a book. … So today, at last I did it. I waited till the regular time and, when I saw the wretch appear on the other side of the street, I went into the house, hid behind a door, and lay there waiting for him. “

In all justice to him, he did not tempt fate by marrying a beauty. Instead, he married a poor, emaciated girl who worked in a men’s clothing factory. By her face one would have thought that she had consumption so our friend felt safe.

Like a boy who discovers a bird’s nest and, hiding nearby, watches the eggs increasing in number every day, so the husband, using a duplicate key to the wood chest where his wife put her valuables, watched the increase in the number of letters concealed there. He had given her the chest during their honeymoon, saying, “Keep your secrets here.” And the ungrateful girl had obeyed him. 

A point of brownish-red was poking through. He flicked at it with his finger. A little more red showed. He dug deeper. It was cloth. He grabbed it and pulled out a red plaid flannel shirt, much like Roy’s.

The rubble he saw before him was more than just the detritus of the Yellowknife dump — it was the rubble of his future. Wifeless. Homeless. Hopeless.  

It was midnight when Norman wandered over to the tent, now protected with the freshly patched orange tarp. His van was gone, and several boxes of his possessions were sitting outside the tent. She hadn’t left a note. Norman sighed and crawled into the rickety tent. It swayed slightly but remained upright. He slept soundly for the first time in months.

By dint of his drudgery he saved a few months’ wages, added a few dollars more each fall to his payments on the mortgage; but the only real difference that it all made was to deprive her of his companionship. to make him a little duller, older, uglier than he might otherwise have been. He never saw their lives objectively. To him it was not what he actually accomplished by means of the sacrifice that mattered, but the sacrifice itself, the gesture– something done for her sake.

It was later, when they had left her a while to be alone with him, that she knelt and touched his hand. Her eyes dimmed, still it was such a strong and patient hand; then, transfixed, they suddenly grew wide and clear. On the palm, white even against its frozen whiteness, was a little smear of paint.

She began to think about it now. Thoughts that outstripped her words, that left her alone again with herself and the ever-lurking silence. Eager and hopeful first; then clenched, rebellious, lonely.

Aging temp, run, run, running, uptown, downtown, all for $7.45 an hour and a few daydreams.

What she really means is that there is a massive speed-up campaign going on. The point is not so much to lay people off as to make the remaining ones do twice as much work. They’ve got children, some have husbands and mortgages, and they all have to eat. 

I will tell the temp agency I will never work here again. … So when you stand there waiting for the elevator, and the other people are waiting for the elevator, they all smile at each other. Then when people get on the elevator, they all smile at the people already on the elevator and the people already on the elevator smile at the people getting on at each floor. All the time.

Diary of a Temp

imagesOkay! Last short story. Today’s story, Diary of a Temp, focused on what most of us will deal with at one point or another in our lives: work. The protagonist, an aging woman with arthritis, works in Vancouver at a variety of jobs in the early 1970s. It’s a time of cutbacks and layoffs and as a temp, she is sent in to temporarily replace workers who have been let go.

25iht-design1_span-articleLargeI picked this story for two reasons: It is really good at getting inside the mind of a real life human being and it is almost sociological in its insight into what it was like in terms of hiring, firing, and living in the 1970s. The third thing you may or may not notice you will within the next five or six years: the more things change the more they stay the same. Remember the word “syncophant”? Look it up. They will always exist.

I told you I’d find more info and post it on my blog. Here you go: a blog called Diary of a Temp. The woman who writes it could almost be the same woman forty years later. Life is a struggle sometimes and people are brave and determined and they do what they have to do to keep going. Here’s the modern day temp: http://diaryofatemp.wordpress.com I am so impressed by this woman’s blog. You will be, too. She is WAY funnier than the woman in the short story (who wasn’t funny at all, just sarcastic and tired) and she’s modern!! She’s also a really good writer.

Getting Grounded

Mon Sept 16/Tue Sept 17: You’ve done four stories in a row and needed a rest so today was a Catch Up and Get Grounded Day. I gave back marked work and work that could be improved (due tomorrow morning by 8:00 !) and you spent the period working on one of the last three stories we’ve done. 

If you received work back, it was for one of these reasons:

  • the paragraph wasn’t 10 – 15 sentences long
  • you didn’t have three quotes in the paragraph
  • you didn’t have a topic sentence
  • there was no context: name of characters, setting, or name of the story

These were all errors in the paragraph question. Please remember, I will only re-mark the paragraph, not the whole assignment — and this is only for the first assignment. It’s better to just do it correctly in the first place!

The Painted Door

john-painted-doorimages18Thur Sept 12/Fri Sept 13Trust me. I am not choosing grim stories on purpose. There are no other stories to choose from! … Sorry. But didn’t you like this one a little bit?

Okay. The story: Anne is a young wife living in a two room house with her dedicated, dutiful, dull husband. It’s snowing. It’s always snowing. It never stops snowing. Did I mention her house has two rooms? Here’s Anne’s life: Go into Room A, look out window, see snow. Or: Go into Room B, look out window, see snow. Of course, there’s always the other option: Go into Room C (outhouse) after walking through snow. Poor Anne. She’s young, she’s bored, and she’s got nothing to do but paint the walls and make raisin cakes, just in case husband John comes home and neighbour Steven comes over to play cards.

img168434c4c929c64594But will John return? There’s a double ring around the moon and that means a big storm. Anne can’t even find her way to the barn. Surely John will be sensible and stay at his dad’s. Oh, oh. Here’s Steven. This is ominous. Steven is insolent, arrogant, and bad news. Anne has a crush on Steven. Where’s John?

Okay, that’s as far as this precis goes. You know the ending. Paint on the door. Paint on John’s hand. John frozen to a fence. And where’s Steven? Nowhere to be seen.

Grim.

Here are some pictures for you. This is what I think John looks like. He just looks tired, don’t you think? And here’s Steven. Now you get why Anne wanted John to shave. I like John better. Steven just looks like some picture you’d find on a site of 1930s movie stars. Oh, wait. That’s where I got the picture.

GO HERE FOR THE ASSIGNMENT: DUE SEPTEMBER 23.

Metonymy

images-4Tue Sept 10/Wed Sept 11:  A cautionary tale for Canada Post? Or just a strange story? Both, I think.

This is a story, ostensibly written by a writer who looks back to the 1930′s when she heard an unusual tale of marital infidelity. A man marries a consumptive woman whose biggest goal in life is getting food to eat. She is sickly and needy and he is the rich owner of a grocery store. What could be better? He feeds her and feeds her and feeds her and she blossoms into this lovely woman.

This would be a nice story and the end of a nice story, but unfortunately Fate always has to wreck things. Enter the Sargeant. The wife has an affair, the husband is oblivious, and things move along in their own duplicitous way until the Sargeant is transferred. Then irony takes over from fate.

images-5The wife is heartbroken, can’t eat, can’t sleep, and just sighs all day. In no time at all, her blooming beauty is gone and she looks just as consumptive as she did when the husband first found her. Now’s he’s  suspicious … and nosy. While she’s working in the store, the husband snoops in her drawer upstairs. In the box he gave her for her “secret things,” he finds  the Sargeant’s love letters. Day after day, he reads them. Jealousy is piled on jealousy yet somehow the woman doesn’t realize her husband has figured out her secret. (These two seem well matched, don’t they? He doesn’t notice and she doesn’t notice. … Why, it’s almost like irony.)

Anyway, eventually, the husband’s jealousy and hatred reach epic proportions. He conveniently finds a revolver a customer has left in lieu of money. He loads the revolver and he sets out to kill someone. Who? The wife? The lover? No. That would be logical — and would match every Agatha Christie whodunnit ever written.

He kills the mailman. The mailman delivered the letters. Of course, the mailman has to die. The story is called “Metonymy.”

GO HERE FOR THE ASSIGNMENT: DUE SEPTEMBER 19.

The Harness

images-32Fri Sept 6/ Mon Sept 9:  It’s hard to believe this story is set in the 1950s. There are so many elements of it that are completely contemporary. Who hasn’t heard of “helicopter parents” unable to distinguish between their children and themselves and unable to allow their children to become independent?

The Harness is really a psychological study more than anything, focussed on the nuances of human behaviour and parent child relationships. Character #1: Art, the dad. His wife died immediately after giving birth to David, the son, and Art has been trying to figure out how to be a dad to his strange young son ever since. Character #2: David, the quirkiest of only children, a boy who doesn’t have the faintest idea how to interact with kids his own age and assumes he is his dad’s equal and best friend.

Perpetually unsure of how to handle the boy, Art treats him as a mini hired hand. David follows Art where ever he goes, mending fences, doing odd jobs around the farm. In the process, he unconsciously causes David to become even more odd and guilt ridden because he can’t seem to act like a 35 year old man. Both father and son are completely inarticulate about their feelings, as well, and this leads to the central misunderstanding in the story. In the end, it’s a story of realization and redemption as Art realizes his son doesn’t need a pal; he needs a father.

GO HERE FOR THE ASSIGNMENT; DUE SEPTEMBER 18.

The Prospector’s Trail

Wed Sept 4/Thur Sept 5: Today you met me and I met you and I have to say I really like you people. I am really, really, really looking forward to teaching you.

Beginning Info: You received four handouts: The Elements of the Short Story, “The Prospector’s Trail,” Questions for “The Prospector’s Trail,” and the outline for English 11. What you need to do ASAP:

  1. Get your parents to sign the registration/appropriate use contract so that I can give it to the Office.
  2. Make a wordpress blog (Go here for instuctions.) After you’ve created your blog, give me the link to your site and I’ll post it here under “Student Blogs.”
  3. Set up a twitter account so I can send you messages and then “follow” me so I can “follow” you.
  4. Get your parents to read the English 11 Course Outline so they know about this blog. Ask them to sign your Outline and bring it back to me.

Short Story: The story we read was called “The Prospector’s Trail.” It’s not in any text book I’ve ever seen but it’s a short story, it’s Canadian, I like it, and the book was only $3.99 at Value Village. All of these elements equal a good short story. And trust me, if I gave you the stories out of the authorized short story books you’d all be cowering under your beds afraid of nuclear war and death. “A Prospector’s Trail” has characterization, all the elements of the short story, and no death.

roy2Synopsis: There’s Norman. There’s Jennifer. There’s Roy. There’s Elsie. And there’s the North West Territories. Norman and Jennifer are young, newly married, and from Winnipeg. They met at a marketing course in college and are completely mismatched. Jennifer is a high achiever and Norman is a guy who trips over air and spills coffee on every single thing he comes in contact with. Jennifer is a notch away from completely fed up but she’s giving Norman one more chance before she leaves for a better life — which in her view is any life without Norman. Norman has decided he wants to open up an interpretation center in the North West Territories. This sounds reasonable until you find out what an interpretation center is. It’s a place where people act out history and wear costumes from the past. As someone who has lived in the North West Territories, I will tell you this does not describe anything about the North West Territories. There are no costumes and the history is still in process. An interpretation center makes absolutely no sense. But then, neither does poor Norman.

roySo that’s Norman and Jennifer. They wouldn’t make it through Round One of The Bachelor but somehow they’re married. Enter Roy, who coincidentally is wearing not just a red plaid shirt but a symbolic red plaid shirt. Pay attention to the shirt. Roy is married to Elsie and they’re both in their 70s. They’ve adapted to each other and give each other space. They’re a contrast to Norman and Jennifer. Roy is a mystery man at first. He’s some kind of prospector, lives in Yellowknife, and seems to have made good money at something. Roy and Norman connect and … well, let’s just say the North West Territories claims Norman for its own. And it all has to do with the symbolic red flannel shirt. This is a gentle, kind of sweet, moderately amusing story. You would have enjoyed it more if I hadn’t given you questions but … I’m a teacher. It’s in my contract. Sorry.

yellowknife dumpHere’s a nice picture of the actual garbage dump in Yellowknife.

Review of how to get a good mark on the questions: Full sentences. Detail. Insight. Depth. Quotes from the story. 

GO HERE FOR THE ASSIGNMENT; DUE SEPTEMBER 10.